129 - Celebrant
🕑 Added 2026-02-18 17:00:20 +0000 UTCComments
deKu
Omg the dialogue in this was so powerful. I am so impressed
Connor Shearn
I think that caught Her attention.
Argent Twig
Must say this again. Read deeper and bookmark this chapter. These two are excellently written. "When even the gods are trembling, I know I walk the proper course.” Shakespeare would steal that quotable.
Codered999
Jackass, you shouldn't have been doing the ritual to begin with, the fuck you expect someone ignorant of the consequences of breaking it to do when they can't attack you directly
linkhyrule5
Given what he was doing last time, I suspect it's going to be more along the lines of "exploding reality and dimensional barriers"... Which is even better as a signal flare, but miiight have some unfortunate side effects.
Etez
Same. Lots of NPCs. I don't even bother commenting on this story anymore cuz of that xD just randomly opened the comments and saw this as 2nd up
NeverendingMixUp
Well an exploding bone thing is probably a good signal flare..
Undead Writer
TFTC!!
Phsteven
Half dragon form, so sorta like a dragonborn from d&d, but with wings.
bladepony games
Thanks for the chapter
Aihnman
She's carrying a sword as a dragon?
Ivon
Sometimes I read some of the other comments left here and wonder if I'm even reading the same book as the commenters.
Nick
Well the intended way of getting Vivi's attention is a big magical flare right? What is a destabilizing ritual if not a big magical flare?