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115 - Bailiff

🕑 Added 2026-01-16 17:00:20 +0000 UTC

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Cyclone001

Possible typo: Vivi refers to the town as Crestbook. Up until this chapter, the town was Crestwood. Intentional?

Chance

I honestly don't understand what everyone has against an overpowered MC.. If anything, I think making the story interesting and entertaining despite how powerful she is actually says more about a writer's ability than a series of tropey troubles would 🤷‍♂️ tftc

Lord grimm

You know I'm still on thet opinion that she should not be able to save everyone, that would actually give so much more to the story

Tjai

Excellent plot device to counterbalance the overpowering Vivi: source of death unknown, and can be triggered at any moment, but there is a clear path to stopping yet, but she is pulled in two directions at once (healing and locating E)

Cyclone001

True. We wouldn't be here if we didn't love the story and characters, mild quips not withstanding. Keep up the great work, ArcaneCadence.

Argent Twig

One of the notable things in reading these comments, is how bought into the characters the readers are. That is a very good thing, (excepting to the level of Stephen King's Misery novel) . The readers see the characters. The readers now mostly say thank you, or comment on the characters as persons. Few comments reference the writing strengths, weaknesses or the story except for pace or cliff hangers. Not a criticism but an observation. Feedback isn't just thanks, it's a way for the author to strengthen, prune and grow the story. Feedback is with respect, or even humor. Nice to see the bailiff so well written as an experienced veteran handling an ugly choice at the last extremity. The chapter is well done.

The Exit Strategy

I think the illusion is more there to make Vivi feel better than it is for the other people she encounters.

GreenB

Nice to see a truly competent town leader once in a while.

James Burén

at this point, she should just remove the illusion on her face

Owen

Magical supercancer

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!

Sam

Uh, you do realise Vivi can by the sounds of it heal those infected? Meaning "cure her" would be obvious as what she would do.

Spencer

Good chapter, thank you

Diego Rossi

Vivi versus the timer of Damocles.

Undead Writer

TFT

squish

Would they believe the baliff though, how fast does news from the capital travel for a random village in the middle of nowhere to even have a vague idea she might be back. Again the 'no one will believe you' trick doin work.

Jiayi Xu

Yum

bladepony games

Thanks for the chapter

Cellinia

Vivi versus the Sword of Damocles

Matt Grayson

Did we read the same chapter?

mistakenot

Sounds like the next chapter will be about curing the infected, so we'll have to wait to find out what Eshara and her party are doing. I wonder if we'll get to see Leslie the healer's perspective as Vivi does her magic, or maybe a POV from one of the patients.

Steven C

I'm struggling not to think a LOT less of MC as she judges a good decision that could save the town and approves a bad one that would likely - without her ridiculous-longshot presence - have gotten a bunch of people massacred.

Niels Valkenborgh

I have a feeling Eshara is going to be infected. Going to be interesting to see what Vivi is gonna do.

Robert Mullins

She has once again failed her 'try to go 24 hours without revealing you're the sorceress' challenge run.

Stuart prior

Well imagine what the baliff is feeling now, a hero out of the past arrives in his village to help them. That like jesus rocking up and curing cancer

hazey

Tyftc!

Cam

TFTC!!

H3lg3

Thanks for the chapter!

Kasamuri

Thanks for the chapter!


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