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Raytraced Audio - Draft V1 [10:09] - Harsh Feedback Wanted
🕑 Added 2025-03-04 22:06:05 +0000 UTCHey everyone, I would love to get your feedback on the first draft of my Raytraced Audio video.
Because my script is constantly changing and the timing of the animations must match my voice, I don't polish the animations until the script is final. This draft has freeze frames, sharp transitions, and poor audio, so I'm not looking for feedback on:
transitions / overall video editing
audio / voiceover quality (emotion in my voice, background noise, echo)
I would love your harsh feedback on:
when/why you stopped watching
which parts were confusing
which concepts weren't explained well
if a part of a video felt like filler and can be removed
the overall flow of the video - i.e. more time should be spent on X instead of Y, or if there were there abrupt topic changes
There's also no background music right now. In the final version I want to fade between regular background audio and raytraced/spatialised background audio
Also I don't start talking about raytracing until 2:40. The first couple minutes are spent giving an overview of spatial audio. What are your thoughts on this, do the first 2 minutes feel like filler?
Here is my script, feel free to comment there too.
I am looking for harsh feedback, I'm happy to change the video entirely
![Raytraced Audio - Draft V1 [10:09] - Harsh Feedback Wanted](https://img10.patrefans.com/storage/2/il/xu/563145-019e7176-875b-74d1-9f4b-771cb022b66d.jpg)
Comments
Audrius Rudalevičius
I also woud add comparison of sound how it sounds "plain" without any effects, a bit confuses me if there echo like sound in the melody it self or it is affected by any modification. https://youtu.be/jBogspyPfP0?t=201
Moritz Scheuerle
I would suggest that instead of playing music at around 4:40 - 5:40, you also show other sounds like a gun shot, single beep tones or people talking. You can also explain a bit more what sound effects you like to mimic as a goal
