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December WIP Pages II
🕑 Added 2024-12-30 12:51:45 +0000 UTCThis is looking a lot better overall, but the left pose on the last page still doesn't look dynamic enough. I LOVE the right pose on that page, but her stance in the left panel is too stiff for the amount of energy she needs to be putting into that thrust to bisect that monster.
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Kaywye
Yeah, it's the legs in the left panel of the 4th page. While I am by no means an expert, having the legs straight like that makes the panel lack a sense of movement. It also keeps the image from imparting the effort involved. The way it's drawn brings to mind that she is just standing there and effortlessly moves only her arms to slash open her target. While that sort of op is often portrayed in anime...it doesn't work in this comic, I believe.
