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1.e [Nikolas Aetos]

🕑 Added 2023-05-24 18:40:38 +0000 UTC

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Orm

every bit as important for - impotent

Valerian

That's pretty cool if that is the case. And interesting because she found Griffon and Solus before Socrates did.

Caoimhín

Typos I found: chrysanthemum - chryselephantine his heart. Flame - his heartflame or heart's flame Polyzalus of Burning Dusk, took the city - delete the comma his white, knuckled - his white-knuckled For the innocence that died - For the innocent that died Caster - Castor

Caoimhín

"The ideal of cultivation is to begin at the foot of the mountain and end at the peak. The experience of cultivation, on the other hand, is the reverse. Cultivation is a chariot teetering on the peak of a mountain. Once it starts rolling, there’s no stopping it until it hits the bottom.” Storywriting is the same, Striker. The story will only get larger. Advance and consign yourself to neverending ascension.

Caoimhín

Oh, Socrates's wife? I had wondered if that crone was more relevant than she seemed at first. I thought she was also a soothsayer or something after she gave Griffon that shawl. Quite unexpected but interesting. Kinda sad that Niko didn't take her with him.

Sam Baker

Stunning. Always. And now I can't wait for safer shores, and epic arcs

Luciaron

Epic in the truest sense of the word

Shadow Wallace

Damn, just damn Striker. It sucks that the webcomic was a one time thing, cause it would've taken off for sure.


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