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Chapter 45: Assailants

🕑 Added 2024-04-05 20:38:18 +0000 UTC

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Sammy Girl

He does! But tbf, the Emperor only sent about... 2-3 guards to the Empress. The rest are either with him or on missions sent by him. And the Empress *is* more important than Samaya and Manu in the political context. The Emperor had no reason to think anyone would be able to sneak into the inner courtyards of the Imperial Harem. He will know better now XD And thank you! Compliments make my day!

Sgt. Tibs

I think you did a good job! Looks like the emperor has some competition with Han Qin saving the day again. Manu really needs some guards though. I get that everyone assumes the empress is having a son (even if they actually have no clue) but "he's" not born yet.

Sammy Girl

That's a relief to know! I get very nervous about the flow getting rigid and awkward because I know from experience that can break the immersion. I am glad you enjoyed!

Freddyz02

Yeah, you do them very well. I often times have the same issues and My whole dillema is going for the 'feel of the moment' like you're with the character. Yours are much more fluid, they fit with the scenes and fights so well. Don't beat yourself up too much :3

Sammy Girl

..... Excuse me while I go to the corner and blush. Thank you! This kind of comments make all the sleepless nights writing worth it lol

Overclocked

If the action scenes are your weakness it explains why the rest of your story is so well written.


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