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Noyemi 2 The Race WIP 8
🕑 Added 2025-06-30 13:00:16 +0000 UTCHere's an insight into my editing process using a previous page I thought I "completed". It often happens that I look at a drawing and see many problems with it that I didn't notice before, so I have to do some heavy editing. My goal here is to make things look interesting and dynamic, and keep the dialogue fun and informative (for the plot). Left is the old page, right is new.
The red text is what I don't like, and the green text is what I came up with to fix the problem. These aren't rules or anything, just my thoughts. The page is still not complete as I can do a better job with details, and the dark background is just a placeholder for now.
If this kind of stuff is interesting I'll try to do more.
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DandyFeller (AKA Drew)
You're right that the positioning of the dialogue between the panels flows better. I definitely like the breakdown and thought process going on when creating these.
