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Chapter 72 - Siege of Lazhen, part four

🕑 Added 2025-09-25 17:00:17 +0000 UTC

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Erebus

Gah. Rereading my suggestion makes me feel like the wording/comma placement is still off, I guess suggestion is really to just remove the ‘the’ before Trianglar. Sounds odd

Erebus

-=-=- *Sent to the Triangler the realmnet moderator in the middle of the Siege of Lazhen. Trianglar caved under pressure and told her everything. -=-=- .. Would this sound better if it was like this instead? —> *Sent to Triangler, the realmnet moderator in the middle of the Siege of Lazhen. Trianglar caved under pressure and told her everything. .. Also I think it’s missing the ———— line break thing that is there at the bottom, before the story starts again

Erebus

Thanks for the chapter 🙂


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