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Chapter 29 - An Eye of Fire

🕑 Added 2024-07-05 16:00:14 +0000 UTC

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gostsamo

The red-headed league, really? :) > part of the warehouse groaned, the effects of the spell still working on parts of the warehouse before fading out. > As opposed to the ends of my arms, where veins cut paths of fire burning through me. I kept moving, biting my tongue to prevent a scream as the fire spread up my arm. all arms in the chapter happen close to each other sentence wis > The rotted and roasted remains still moved, as what remained of his limbs moved, move, move -> wriggled > as flesh reformed. Flames still licked at the flesh, but the flesh it consumed continued to grow quite fleshy Overall, you might benefit from an editor or chatgpt looking through the text to clean up the low hanging fruit


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