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Chapter 11: Never Consume Unfamiliar Substances

🕑 Added 2024-05-24 16:00:08 +0000 UTC

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gostsamo

> not that I’d ever let Zarrow now. know, I believe > He got rather cross with some urchins when we tried to nab it we or they?? > "I do not," I replied quickly. "I'd never seen it before that day, nor did I find out was inside, nor do I care to find out inside. I only hid it and tried to retrieve it because I have to leave here Mr. Voltar, and that is do not cross the Black Flame." this needs a few "what"s somewhere there and the last part seems gobbled up between "live here" and maybe something about rules. > One I must attend to soon, myself. is the comma necessary?


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