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Chapter 16 - Lead III

🕑 Added 2025-02-12 16:00:13 +0000 UTC

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Frog

actually hella looking forward to malvia moments with the two bishops. It’s interesting

Neil Stevens

The plan is to keep chapters at this length if it's sustainable for me. I'd regret having to split chapters up but I'd regret not being able to keep consistent updates going even more.

Colin Love

Damn I love the current writing format few cliffhangers, well balanced chapters that have an introduction a purpose moving the plot forward & are wrapped up on at a natural transition. Some authors who write in shorter format drop a hook chapter then a transition to the main event which often ends up filler slice of life. Then of course. The main plot point is revealed yet can be left hanging for a clearing up chapter. Good writing is good writing mitigating a decline in quality but the Patreon model can reward more less substantive chapters. I suppose as long a the their just shorter and it bugs me I can wait and read a few a time.

UnderwhelmingBird

Aww she's still a bit of a softie at heart, looking out for Melissa. Also RIP the third nerd


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