Back in Time Caption

Areg5

Fair enough. It's not set in stone. If there's interest in a re-do, I'll do it. If there isn't, I won't.

WillowD

I have read both version of this story and liked them. But I didn't absolutely adore them and read them over and over like some of your other stories. Then again, you have taken some of your older stories and re-written them to be a so much better story with much better graphics. A re-make would be a really great story. But your point about it being a different sub-genre to most of the stories on t his site is important. Also, almost all of your modern stories contain characters from your other stories, which leads your readers to wondering what a favorite character in an earlier story to wonder what is going to happen next. My gut feeling is that creating a new story would be better than redoing this one. Although, now that you've asked the question, you have me curious...

Areg5

It happens.

Shoji

Oops sorry I didn’t realize this was your idea Areg sorry. I was looking at Trinity’s post at the time I posted this response, But still do the redo

Areg5

As far as making major changes, I wouldn't do that without talking to Hal. I sent him an email, but I don't know how current the address is. I'll give him a lot of time to respond.

Emjayw

Following on from reading your later version, I then went looking for Hal’s original story and realised that this second version followed the storyline more precisely. Enjoyed both and if you have a different ending this time, even better.

Areg5

Actually, in the later version I tried to stay closer to Hal's original story.

Areg5

If you want Trinity to redo it, although I don't think this kind of comic is really his thing, you should ask him.

Shoji

Trinity please redo this ..this was one of my favorite Areg classics IMO . It was AR in a strange way. Not so much as magical physical transformation but a lot of mental which was unique. There was a lot of explanation that I needed that we didn’t get, so I would love to see this done over with more detail. I think what Areg did with Changing Clothes to Michael/ Michelle is a great example how you can take a vague odd Story and turn it into a memorable one. BIT needed some more character clarification like a backstory with Clarice

Emjayw

Read your original and a similar storyline with age regression. When I attempted to find these stories, I eventually located yours plus your rewrite. Liked the different endings and the caption implies a third ending, so bring it on. Cousin and Mommy always grated, so good to return as little sister. Possibly too much spanking in later version, for my tastes, so different plot lines to show distress suffered would be interesting.

Sieti

I was more focused on the storyline. I thought Kimmy interacting with just her "Mommy" and "big sister" was a nice choice.

Areg5

Heh. Yeah, I figured that was it. :D

Bob Fink

Never mind I was thinking entirely the wrong way I thought the right side was pre makeover, my bad.

Areg5

Well, the first one was pretty rough from a graphic standpoint. The second one I thought was better, but I have since learned that certain images can be misinterpreted, which is why neither version is posted on CC.

Sieti

I remember both comics and don't mind saying that I actually liked your first comic more than the 2nd one. Also you can pick up on Kimmy's despair as she is calling for help at the end.

Areg5

I haven't spoken to Hal in years. But the last time I did, I asked him that very question, and he nixed it. It's his story. I would want to do it the way he would want me to.

Areg5

Tyler type? How so?

Why not a mixer of both. After being treated as a young girl, her mind causes her body to react growing younger to fit.

Bob Fink

So instead of AR, you're thinking more along the lines of a Tyler type makeover?