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School Daze Part 1

🕑 Added 2020-03-06 16:59:00 +0000 UTC
School Daze Part 1

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Areg5

The real reason is that when I had her show up in the cafeteria, I was at a loss for what she would say. I thought it would just be funny if she started grabbing food. That then worked for the surprise visit in the kitchen. :D

Bob Fink

I know, right? She must have one hyper active metabolism!

Areg5

Yep. In this case the unanswered question is: why is Aimee always so hungry? :D

Bob Fink

Yes it does, and I love being able to re read the story and not have multiple files to open. :D

Areg5

Heh. There are a lot of reasons that I like you, Bob. But the main one may be that you are easy to please! You're very welcome. I obviously read these as I do them as far as the dailies go. But when you see it all together and read the whole thing, it just puts everything into better perspective.

Bob Fink

Thank you so much for putting this all together in one download. You ROCK!

Shoji

There’s always Part 2 you can add Josie on the title page since I see Beta Test Returns have a different title picture between the first comics # 1-8 and now 9 - current seems to have an alternate title image. So when Part Two or the conclusion wraps up maybe put a new image for the second compilation cover . Something that could be fun is a group shot like the teens Evie, Joey, Josie ..including Aimee and Cassie smiling and having fun in their swimsuits and bikinis and then have the old witch frowning behind them in an “ Kids ... They never learn “ smirk , and having Sara and Mary smiling next to the witch . I’m sure us Patreons including typewriter will love the creativity 😆

Areg5

That might have been fun. I basically just wanted the couples mirrored. Everything the same except expressions.

Shoji

I see I can see Typewriter’s inquiry about showing Josie. Given the background dark hue you used I suppose you could’ve put Josie maybe in a raised position ( perhaps smiling or winking or even a jumping Yay motion ) standing right behind teen Joey 😉 that would’ve been fun to see on the title page . Or maybe have Josie lean on teen Joey’s shoulder or maybe have Josie peek her head in between both teen Evie and Joey . Just food for thought 😁

Areg5

The Oni comic doesn't look too long, but they always seem to run a bit long. I don't think you will have to wait too long for the conclusion. Glad you like the title page. Thought I would make it fancy. Typewriter thought that Josie should be on the cover, but I didn't want to give anything away and for most of the comic, he's Joey. As for changes: I redid some of the frames when Aimee is meeting with the witches, as they were too dark. Minor dialogue changes too. That's about it. No video for this one. That doesn't seem to get too many views on other comics so I stopped doing that.

Shoji

Areg I like the this title page for the part 1 compilation. Before I delete the individual comics..did you make any major changes ? If so..what? I like having the one big compilation because it’s easier to view at once andI can free up space by removing the individual comics . Hope we don’t to wait too long for the continuation of this story


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