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The Second Chance Hotel

🕑 Added 2021-12-15 00:32:17 +0000 UTC

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Naks

https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/15622 is the link on GSS

Derek Williams

It was only five years ago! I was doing some heavy hypno work at the time, really getting good and dumb, so it was a hot story but some of my worst writing!

Derek Williams

Here’s the shot I think DJ would mix for you: start with a heavy dose of muscle, add in a good taste of dumbness, mix in some exhibitionism, and sprinkle in an uncontrollably gay sex drive. Serve with a sprig of narcissism. Good luck with that after three days ;)

Derek Williams

Thanks! I think you were the one who commented on GSS that you’d love to see a rewrite, so I’m glad the reboot worked for you! It’s a different ending, but I think it’s a much stronger story now. I really enjoyed revisiting it — especially the new scene where Michael and Pete talk through the problem. That one tickles me.

welan

How long ago was that original story . Like 10 years ago right?

Naks

wow! I'm gonna book a plane to this second chance hotel right now and not cum for 3 days.... I can't wait!!! thanks for using my suggestion! it was #amazeballs! #mahalo #DWisGOD

Transformheaven

The Second Chance Hotel was one of the first stories that hooked me to the genre, great to see it revisited!

Derek Williams

Yes. It’s a slang term for an Italian-American subculture. If you know Jersey Shore, those guys identify as guidos. It’s worth noting — some people consider the term derogatory or offensive.

welan

Is guido an real term?


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