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You’d Look Prettier If You Smiled

🕑 Added 2022-04-27 06:08:46 +0000 UTC

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Derek Williams

Yeah, I had fun with the ‘good to evil’ idea. A lot of people would say there’s nothing wrong with being apathetic and materialistic, but from Troy’s perspective that’s literally the worst thing you can be.

Naks

this is my favorite kind of trope. i kind of wish we knew what alfie's programming said... i know we see it, but the suggestion part is my favorite. i also love the change, good to evil type of thing. this was super hot! five out of five stars, would totally recommend!

Derek Williams

Thanks! I'd suspect that Troy got his jawline enhanced, and probably pec and ass implants too.

Ace

I really enjoyed this! Great concept. I’d love to see the other changes Troy got. I think plastic surgery is hot.

Derek Williams

Thank you! When I brainstorm a story, there’s always a moment I see in my head that sparks my interest. For their story, it was Boswell triggering him for the second time.

Derek Williams

Hah, that is hilarious. Granted, I’m Canadian and I spell things in that way, but I sort of pictured this taking place in Oregon or Northern California. That line was intended in an American context, though yeah, it’s way funnier in a Canadian one.

Hugh Michelsen

This was hot! The first changeover was especially hot, when he gets super vapid and vain. Then the struggle when Boswell reveals everything got even hotter.

Hugh Michelsen

“Otherwise the USSR would still be around – with our people in charge.” This cracked me up. Just thrown in as an aside. Would make way more sense if Alfie was American. No way the Canadian government was successfully doing mind control programs back then lol.


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