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A Wednesday In The Life

🕑 Added 2025-02-01 02:43:58 +0000 UTC

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Derek Williams

Hah, glad you liked that line — definitely a wink at the audience. Montgomery is an interesting character. He knows how powerful Jake is, and he wants to own and use that power, but not be touched by it himself. The blindfold is there because Montgomery figures if Jake can’t see him… well, then he can’t transform him. Right? We may have to put that to the test eventually. Especially if Montgomery comes after Jake for what happened with Spencer. Yeah, this one was relatively dry when it came to sex. Next one should more than make up for it.

Derek Williams

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed them :) When I outlined the story, I didn’t really intend for his bandmates to get swept along, but… what can I say, I like boy bands!

Hugh Michelsen

My favorite line in this story: “Look... elevator rides don’t take long.  You need an elevator pitch.” I love it when you almost break the fourth wall and have the narrator explain something that is short or could be repetitive. Makes me smile. This did a fantastic job of making me interested in Montgomery without paying off yet. With the blind fold, I was wondering if he was one of Jake’s friends. Does he have others like Jake working for him? Has he set things up by putting bait for Jake at places Jake will go, like the hotel or Neon? Also reminded me of Catch of the Day: lots of hot transformations with a through line plot and some mystery. Very nice! I definitely could have used more of Spencer. The first transformation was hot but I was interested in what he looked like under his towel. I got excited again when Jake returns to him, but still didn’t get to hear about what was down under :)

Sacher

Loved you crafting all the boy band archetypes, was worried when Lucas didn’t end up in rockstar leather but you came through with the other guys.


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