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Jaune to Jaune Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2022-10-18 01:01:18 +0000 UTC

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Jeremy Mosher

Liked it, but as the previous commenter mention… it did seem a little rushed. Even seeing a few days of the trip and what the pair had to do to survive along with dealing with their growing relationship would have been nice. A first night with a time skip to show one or two nights mid journey… followed by the meeting. All in all I love the story… hope everything is going better for you this month.

Juliet Taylor Briar

Felt a tiny bit rushed, mostly due to the 2 week skip. Couldve seen the travel and the relationship between the two when it comes to more normal interactions and have good character writing opportunities. But i also totally understand wanting to just get to the meeting of everyone. Im really loving this series and im very interested in where in the world we go from here


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