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RE: Trailer Trash Part 2: Surviving Springton High
🕑 Added 2019-03-20 07:35:22 +0000 UTC(
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Cliff D Bocian
waiting on more TT hope you post it soon.
Estranged
Thanks for the story. Interesting as always. Some correction to suggest: “Yeah, you’re like— almost a whole complete different girl then you was,” -> than “Then you were,..." -> than "Laying her sketchpad on the library table, Alicia produced a pen and drew a hasty rectangle, a little wider at the bottom then the top." -> than "Matching up rubble with uneven joins..." -> joints
