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AnimeCon Harem 7: Showdown

🕑 Added 2019-06-27 15:33:20 +0000 UTC

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Looting Pillager

People call the cops on kids running down the hall in hotels. Some bitch beating what looks like a girl in the hallway? Dude 911 would fly all over the place.

Vowron Prime

"Archangel we're going to need an orbital strike. Target goes by the name of Chloe, last name bitch. Bring in the guns, yeah, the big ones. Send Magnus."

Jeff Potato

I'm confused. How did Stephanie figure out how to do harem charm color magic secret arts? Like, she was the one to figure out the magic was happening, sure, but deliberately reaching out to someone else affected by the charm (without touching her) seems like it comes out of nowhere. Also holy fuck what is the charm's magic doing to Chloe. Is it only designed to work on approximately-neurotypical people, so when someone has as many huge problems as Chloe it's damaging (or *feels* damaging anyway)?

Youkai-sama

I'm actually curious to see just HOW you intend to redeem that horrible bitch; especially if you say she's gonna get worse before she heals. How are you gonna structure the machinations of her psychotic neurosis, and what, if anything, is gonna be left beneath that 'Mind of Metal'?

andy may phan

I'm really enjoying seeing that Steph "leveled up" and how that change is manifesting. It looks like the girls might become better, more concentrated versions of themselves. Really curious what that is going to look like for Emily. :)

JourneymanWizard

All I'm thinking is how this will hurt poor Rebeca

Seadrake

Chloe shouldn't be redeemed. At least not by Brian. Although it's a nice idea that everyone has a bit of good in them, the reality is not everyone should take the time to uncover that good in a person. Someone as abusive and manipulative as Chloe should be avoided and taken away from her victims. If you do want to have her "redeemed" maybe do it as an epilouge, where she found peace out whatever with someone else and is apologizing to Brian. I say this because altough Chloe seems like a caricature I've known people that act like her, in a way. She doesn't deserve Brian's help even if she needs it. It's a harsh truth but she needs to find her help else where.

Adam Kranzel

Chloe hurting Stephanie pushes her way past any possibility of redemption. I agree with yeeteris that’s she’s just become a caricature at this point, and nothing we’ve seen shows that she’s capable of (or even wants to) stop being evil.

FortySixtyFour

Rebecca sees little of the Chloe we see, she's mostly limited to experiencing the more careful and composed (secretly scheming) Chloe.

Aethric

I enjoy the story immensely, except for the Rebecca/Chloe friendship. I understand the need for the plot device of them being friends means Chloe has a ride to the convention, etc., but unless Rebecca herself is an equally terrible person and it just hasn't been revealed yet, thats not the kind of friend you stick with. Maybe there's some crazy backstory here we don't know yet but if I had a friend that did half this level of shit to someone, we wouldn't be friends anymore.

FortySixtyFour

She's definitely still got a ways to go getting worse before she gets better, haha.

TiAM325

Did not see the pregnancy scare coming. Chloe is a manipulative evil bitch, and I used to work with someone just like her. She is not able to humble herself and seek redemption. Break her/burn her. Turn her over to Foxy, she is not worthy of the 'wholesome' harem that Brian has.


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