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Erickefata AnimeCon Harem Cover
🕑 Added 2019-07-04 15:49:32 +0000 UTCWe've gone through our first round of edits and they're looking a bit more like Steph and Kelly. First take is here.
Comments
Batts
Aren't Steffs boots thigh-highs?
Karl Becker
Agree, Kelly’s facial expression is not right. It is too open and naive. She should look a little more jaded.
JourneymanWizard
Steph looks great. Kelly looks good - maybe a little more sultry or mischievous smile? Exciting!
TiAM325
I like version 2 more, still not quite right, but closer. I can't put my thumb on what is still not quite right.
ukyo_rulz
This is what you get when you see two cosplayers walking around in the hallway and ask to take a quick photo of them.
Devon P
She's in a bunny girl costume, not a dress.
John Ion
I know this isn't the finished art, but I do not see any of the playfulness in Stephanie or Kelly - as evident in the Mar 20 cover. maybe that is what you want and maybe not ... but they look ... posed? Hopefully that gets across what I mean. It is a better drawing than what I can accomplish, but seeing the cover would not make me want to "open the cover". It would make a good interior illustration.
Timtom12
I really like the image so far. Not sure what the inconsistencies are though.
I. Ronical
That Kelly face https://i.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/012/834/manfaceaua.jpg
Malcolm Tent
Stephs face is perfect though. You should have him keep that.
