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AnimeCon Harem Bonus: The Night is Young

🕑 Added 2019-12-23 22:49:59 +0000 UTC

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Kelarys

It is inexplicable to me that this was removed from the main story. Literally my only real complaint with this story is how underdeveloped EmilyxSteph is compared to every other pairing, and this single chapter might be the difference I needed. There weren't even any references to the side story except them being in Marino's to eat, which doesn't even matter without context. This not being in the novel release is a travesty

ThorneHawk

Also: "she" in "and within her own mind she everything was going bright" looks wrong?

ThorneHawk

Possible correction : what is "grabbing a neatly garment" supposed to be?

Mazoyer

Also, I haven’t been able to reach for Ivan_ronical, so if you can pass up a message... His writing is as good as yours. I really enjoy his taking the class story. And thanks a lot to you to let us know about it. I hope part 4 is coming soon :-) you are really my 2 favorites web writer :-)


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