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AHE: Rebecca's Car Interior
🕑 Added 2021-01-30 00:31:02 +0000 UTCThe second of our Rebecca's Car themed batch, this is the inside of the vehicle, and the characters will be drawn in to fit the illustration. The Fighting his Past chapter entirely takes place here, and then there's also a scene from Show and Tell, Round Three that uses this location.
The July budget's been a little strained by hiring new character artists to see if they're a good match for our project, so I'm going to put a messier/worn variant and a nighttime variant on hold for a bit. Rebecca's Car (Parked) is up next!
( Rebecca's Car | AnimeCon Harem Eroge | Rebecca's Car Parked )
Comments
FortySixtyFour
There was a crosswalk they'd of had to wait at too.
Mundane
I agree with the other brilliant comments here and definitely think this should be kept. I am not just saying that because of the adorable Emily texting either.
Kirby
Liked this one a lot. Only Emily's texts are a bit too much, she couldn't have written that much in such a short time, especially not while agitated and walking quickly through a convention to the parking lot. If yiu omit a few (only a few) messages and repeats it will have a better pacing and be more realistic.
MonsterGuy
Enjoyed this chapter a lot, thanks! Maybe it was explained previously and I missed it, but why isn't "Let's find a different hotel and call out of work Monday morning" not an option?
Mkrayn
Great stuff. Links it together very well. And I always like it when Rebecca is uncomfortable: great drama.
Brian Czisny
I agree with the others posting here. I think this was an important transition and gives rebecca/mara more “screentime” which is almost neccessary. It also helps cement her as the calm bedrock for the group, and reels her into things when she was otherwise pulling away. It feels like rebecca really needs to feel needed and useful, at least subconsciously. So many layers to her character, and its going to be cool to see how she fits with everyone else.
joss sim
There might be some rework needed but I quite liked this piece! Definitely works as a teaser.
Hey 4064 glad to hear that things worked out for you and I hope everything goes okay. I just wanna say that you’re doing amazing. I absolutely love it every time AH pops up on my feed. I love your writing style and love the characters you have created. Please keep doing amazing work
Dang Fool
Sometimes you need to move on in the story and decide later if you should keep it. It's got great stuff.
Eroyla Drago
This was good! It shows that Rebecca is needed to be the anchor in the relationship
Nchalada
Skipping this would be a mistake, imo. Rebecca's viewpoint on what's happening to Steph and the Dreamscape is much better left in.
Kirrocen
I absolutely vote to keep this segment. Doesn’t seem out of place or needless to me.
Nick
I agree with Chris, this short chapter served as a transition. It works
