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AnimeCon Harem 14: 14 pt 7

🕑 Added 2022-06-28 16:37:50 +0000 UTC

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BS91

No, Chloe's already there, and trying to get the group to send him there to meet her alone.

Arcane Wolf

Keep your chin up! Long time fan and fellow writer eager to see how this plays out

Benjamin Olson

Whatever the pending event is, the resultant Psychic backlash is going to be bad. Distance away from the event and Rebecca are needed to buffer the storm.

Cliff

@BS91 But Kelly is the one sending Chloe to the alley. Kelly is sending them both to the alley.

BS91

It seems the future told her the creeps who attacked Stephanie in the alley were about to get Chloe (that's where Chloe is right now), so Kelly's trying to save her. Dunno why that's making Kelly break down quite this much, though.

rmccurdy

Well now, that well and truly sucked...

@Diego Alejandro Garcia : By jove I've think you got it.

Diego

Kelly sent Brian to the alley where a beated up Chloe was trying to lure him, probably to have him framed as the one who hit her. This is, however, the same alley where Steph was nearly raped the day before, so the question is, did the same guys return and are about to rape Chloe? Is that what Kelly saw in the future and is that what she's trying to prevent?

WhiteRabbit

What the actual fuck...

Eric Burant

Is she setting up Brian to be physically assaulted by Chloe, and taking her out of the picture at great emotional and physical cost to Brian? Is she reporting her rape, or somebody else's? This is really scary, and confusing. I know that the story has never been a fairytale, but I really want these characters to coexist and be happy (hopefully ever after).

Alexander Morland

Wtf

Cliff

"She wasn't suddenly panicking or feeling raped…" From the end of 14 pt 5. So WTAF is happening here?!?!?!

Toodles McGhee

A little too proactive on next year's April Fool release, buddy...

yeeteris dedmeem

Reading the characters try to speak to each other this chapter was absolutely irritating. Half muttered phrases and repeating the same questions and answers over and over are sorta the standard for this story, but it feels like it's getting worse. If you are allocating 2000 words to dialog, it shouldn't be the same 20 words 100 times. That's been the main sore point I've had with this story, the characters spend what feels like forever talking just to get the most simple pieces of information out of each other. It makes reading a lot of the chapters feel like an exercise in futility, where you understand what they're trying to say 10 words in but you still need to sit through the other 1900 of them repeating it to each other.

White Neko Knight

Poor Kelly. The worst part is that Future Kelly probably laid out the plan to get Present Kelly to act this way. Or we're on a new timeline now and everything is up in the air.

AzureXIII

I wonder what Kelly saw. I don't think she is trying to cause the end of the relationship it sounds like whatever their future selves wanted made Kelly feel they were not only manipulating her but also they were trying to manipulate Brian and that this plan could potentially hurt Stephaine, Emily and maybe even Rebecca. Hopefully we get to see what was happening or maybe Kelly tells us what she saw but I doubt that would be in the next chapter as I think that would be either Brian or Chloe getting arressted or both.

Eroyla Drago

What the hell did Kelly do?

Jerzylo

Very nice chapter. The suspense is real.


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