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AnimeCon Harem 16: Seneca Library Meeting

🕑 Added 2023-07-09 21:48:10 +0000 UTC

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I really love this story. Its just so much different from other harem fantasies just for the fact that the characters are so well fleshed out. The time skip felt fine for me. I will say I'd be pretty sad if they went and killed Chloe off. I don't think she has to join the harem if it doesn't feel natural to put her in it but she's had too much backstory and I think is too relevant to kill off. I'm excited to see how Brian deals with her.

McGddson

The time skip felt natural to me and I enjoyed this piece. The crazy weekend is over and you've already transitioned the story to a bigger world, so for the first time in the story it feels like the natural evolution. Things will necessarily take more calendar time to resolve at this point, and if some of that time falls into a routine that won't be enjoyable to read, no reason to write it all out just out of habit :) Emphasizing once again my huge appreciation for your writing; this is a work of art and it gives me great joy to read!

David Hall

Time skips are fine. Just tell your story the best way you can, don’t overthink it.

Raivshard

You should only ever tell a story when there's a story to tell. Don't get hung up on slice of life as a genre; genre can be a guideline, but it should never control your work. Skipping the boring parts is half the work of a good story. You don't talk about every time someone brushes their teeth, every bite of food, and every poop they drop, right? Of course not, that would be boring and weird. It's the same principle. The only line is entertainment value.

Longoo

I'm mostly fine with the time skips, it feels weird trying to make character developments while Brian is in magic coma land.

Ruadhán

Does Steph not know that Christine can’t come near Brian incase the mirror dispells his healing? Then also, if Rebecca’s come off the charm then Chloe’s back without her mirror power, so she’s not got the constant self reflection that enabled Christine to surface


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