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RE: Trailer Trash 52, Moving On.

🕑 Added 2023-08-09 16:05:50 +0000 UTC

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Zach

The more we hype the characters up about Amy Lee, the more I really hope it's just another arc, instead of some finale.

Bilfdoffle

some typos: It didn’t have a loud accompanying loud buzz or anything like it should have from movies loud accompanying loud -> loud accompanying which was worrying for Tabitha because her friend’s tone voice was difficult to read into now. read into now -> read now Even typed them into that Google web page you love you so much, didn’t get a thing back, just nonsense you love you -> you love the strange, possibly-satan cute friend of Elena’s had returned their Sandboro Hot Topic. returned their Sandboro -> returned to their Sandboro

Bohigas Kevin

That is one cute kitty

Gustav Bertram

"trip could be big thing." a missing?

Hawk

As an officer of the BOP I give this portrayal of a realistic prison my unofficial Correctional Officer's stamp of approval. Well done 👍.

Rakkis157

I honestly can't wait for April in story now. Evanescence is awesome.

Chris Myers

Hanna "pretending to vomit"; not "pretending that she was hurling." Bothered me both times I read it. No slang in 3rd person narrative.

Stuart T

I hated the goths like Ziggy. In highschool I was more a wannabe Mr Gary and in my friend circle was a few... friendly? no, welcoming goths. Sure they were angsty as all hell but they owned their angst and didn't throw at you like a monkey hurls crap. Also, nice place and cute kitten but take it from a guy who had a demon in disguise for 11 fantastic years. The cuter the cat, the worse the demon possessing it.

Smartjedi

Enjoy the new place and new kitten!

Stephen Paynter

"This would be so much easier if you faking it for attention" ... "were" missing.

Jeanie6754

Thanks Boss have a great day

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! I love how well you write! It really brings me into the story with how you pepper the characters with depth and meaningful emotions. It is just so much fun to read. I can’t wait for more! Thanks for another great chapter and I hope your move is quick and easy!

Jennifer Foley

Cute kitten! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Sgt. Tibs

Tabitha is a class act. She took the brunt of Nicole’s angst when she coulda thrown Elena under the bus to save herself. It woulda crushed Elena if Nicole started treating her like that. Probably still hurts.

Sean

Ziggy does have the "I'm 16 and I hate the sun" vibe going on. Not a fun person to be around but a great character. The whole chapter is so great but I'm super excited to see the next arc too!