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RE: Trailer Trash 56, The vagaries of adolescence.

🕑 Added 2024-01-19 09:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Mundane

The way you continue to make the most mundane situations, let's go buy a towel, super compelling is so satisfying. That dream sequence was extremely well done. I absolutely can't stand how a dream can ruin my day and you pulled off that feeling perfectly. The highschool drama also continues to be very compelling and I am so so glad I am past all of that. Finally your ability to maintain distinct voices with realistic motivations that put them in conflict with our protagonist while still keeping them sympathetic is unmatched in any other story out there. <3 <3 <3

Sean

Ugh why do you write compelling characters -_- The Clarissa situation feels like leading a horse to water and it being like 'I wanted to be dehydrated actually'. As always I'm excited for more!

Marcus Cassin

That tweak at the end with Clarissa.. there is one girl who's not ready to explain it all. Seriously, though, if somebody is saying the same thing that you've been thinking to yourself... Don't be mad at them for speaking the truth. Of course, easier said than done, when the person in question is an isolated teenage girl who was betrayed by her petty friends.

WarStrider72

Woot the complete chapter! Thanks boss!

NondescriptGamer

"Tabitha hopped up to the edge of the curve as if lining up to board." "curve" should be "curb".

McGddson

Glad you're nicely installed at the new place, congratulations! Have been wondering if things were going well on that front. When it gets super cold in Norway, we leave the taps open so there's a trickle going through them at all times; pulls in a small stream of relative heat from the ground. Plus insulation. Don't know if the water rates allow that in areas that don't get ten feet of rain every year though. Hope the weather improves soon! Thanks for the writing :) <3

Chris Myers

Than-Kanna

Brett

Wow that sucks! The park should refund some monthly payment for the hassle. Not much you could do about it.

Charles Sheaff

Minor edits: What should have been a casual and thoughtless endeavors.. should be endeavor. Next sentence, teenages should be teenagers

FortySixtyFour

MY water isn't frozen per se, the buried water lines going to my part of the park are frozen again. No one on my side of the street has any running water

Toodles McGhee

For places that only occasionally have freezing temperatures so that building codes don't require correct insulation, when expecting freezing weather one can crack a faucet (preferably the one furthest from the main) and the water flow will keep ice from forming (until it's around -60 or so, anyway). Main gotcha is if you use it and forget to leave the cold water trickling when you're done!

Brett

There are probably so many life hacks out there to keep the pipes from freezing. I am excited to read any of your stories. So, please keep them coming.

Stephen Weinberg

You know, with all the inflation the last few years, it would be pretty reasonable to offer a slightly more expensive tier of subscriber without any additional reward besides the thanks of the author….

Sean

I cracked up at Daddy Mcdadfather it sounds so weirdly teenish. Like something you'd hear the average anxious goth teenager to say flippantly.

Undead Writer

Thanks for the chapter! So good to see our MC bonding with Hannah’s dad. They do have the same experiences actually and I never put two and two together until now. Wow! How could I miss that XD. PLUS!! I FINALLY GOT MY HARDCOPY OF RE:TRAILER TRASH!! SO EXCITED!!! ALSO FORGOT HOW HUGE THE FIRST BOOK WAS!! My gosh that is a hefty book!! I LOVE IT!! I’m slowly building up my own library and I love the fact that I can add this book to it! I will definitely be adding the second and third when they are out! Thanks for writing such an awesome book author!

Raivshard

Yeah the water lines have to be insulated and heated or something. Places that get cold like that should look into how Siberian towns do it.

Porkopio

Thanks for the hard work!

Jeanie6754

Thanks for the chapter Boss. Sorry the cold weather is making your life a bit rough hope it turns around soon. I'll be praying for warmer weather for you. Try to relax and keep warm when you can. Unfortunately for me life's been kicking my butt too. This was supposed to be a relaxing staycation week and unfortunately my cat,Mavis, passed away on Wednesday morning so this cheered me up a bit, thanks for that

sjturner79

Yeah been a while, but glad to see you back. Hopefully things warm up in your area soon so you can have water again! See if you can maybe afford a solar camping shower ? They are not expensive in my country, it’s a bag thing you fill up and hang in the sun, then gives you a warm shower a few hours later . Although I don’t know how well they work in snow :(