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Renfaire Fantasy 1: Sofa Session pt 1

🕑 Added 2023-11-09 12:06:38 +0000 UTC

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Russell

Thanks for the tip, Benjamin! I edited my comment.

Russell

Jeanie, empathy is understanding other’s emotions. Stephanie actually FEELS other’s emotions which is “sympathy”.

Dastauf

Super hot! Thank you!

benjamin shropshire

Whatever floats your boat, but I actually enjoy the SFW(ish!) parts more. This part's amusing and all, but on a page for page basis, it seem to do less to advance the plot and character development than most other parts of the story. (I've read some stuff I actually rather enjoyed despite totally skipping over the 10-20% that was this sort of action.)

benjamin shropshire

You can start a new paragraph with Sift + Enter. But, yeah *really* sucktatstic edit element this sight uses.

Jeanie6754

Personally I think you might be getting Emily and Stephanie confused here.

Kalel

Presumably, a strong NSFW warning would involve 6 or more partners going at it in the middle of a crowded street, inside an inflatable pool filled with lube, with rockets exploding in the background and an '80s electric guitar riff drowning out the objections of the bystanders.

Toodles McGhee

To be fair - Forty said the warning was mild, not that the NSFW was. That would be "Warning: Mild NSFW", right??🤪

Russell

Re: Trailer Trash led me to finding AnimeCon on RR. (My first ever foray into RR). THAT led me to Patreon (my first ever foray into Patreon) so that I could catch up on the story. All the writing in these stories is superb. Some people have complained about the POV giving them whiplash, but I don’t have a problem with it at all. At first I was bothered by the crew using the term bi-polar in regards to Christine/Chloe, but then they aren’t psychologists and wouldn’t know the proper term. Also, they say that Stephanie is an “empath”, but in reality she’s a “sympath”, but maybe they wouldn’t understand the difference. It is interesting to see pre-editing mistakes like the use of “then” instead of “than”. There is one thing, though. The term “all of the sudden” being used by the narrator instead of “all of a sudden” takes me out of the flow for a little bit while my grammar-nazi brain tries to reconcile it. Overall, though, FortySixtyFour, you are a brilliant author!

Zaralith

More is all i need, like Steph gagging for that dick

qxvw198

If this is "mild" then I'm curious what a "moderate" NSFW warning would indicate. I can't envision Brian actually choking Emily enough to turn her face as blue as her hair or anything.

Don Lubsen

Firey Liquid Metal! So very hot.

Jeanie6754

Definitely a good way to wake up in the morning. Thanks Boss 😸

Dario Lattanzio

Also lmao, Stephanie just throwing Emily at the spasming in Heaven Kelly like "Your problem now bitch, your pussy Is good but I Need my dose of Dick"

Dario Lattanzio

Ah yes. The MILD NSFW. The delicate, totally not boner inducing NSFW. The chaste and vanilla NSFW. Now with 10% more chocked latinas, ripped shorts and ragdolling straight out of a Bethesda game. That mild NSFW.

Chas Becht

Mild NSFW. Mild.


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