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After AnimeCon: Darkest Night

🕑 Added 2024-01-28 12:03:34 +0000 UTC

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Deon Joyner

They really are built different. That bitch is still breathing 50 chapters later.

Cuticle

Didn't Kelly tell Emily not to taunt/talk to Chloe? Lol.

Joshua Cole

Totally addicted to this story. Happened across the book on Kindle read it straight through in a day. Found more on Royal Road and read all of that, then made my way here so I could keep reading. Write more damn you! Write faster! 😄 No, really though I can't wait for more and I just wanted to say thanks for a great story.

Jeremy Flaherty

I for one enjoy the character drama here. There's a real sense of conflict in Brian and it's translating well to the group. I'm also a great fan of enemies to lovers tropes, so this is right up my alley. Great job, looking forward to the rest!

GaiusMarcus

More shagging, less drama 😀

Sgt Sak

Keep going! You have really good instincts for the story. I managed to get through all the different parts of the Anime culture and references I knew nothing about. The stories are solid, worth reading through parts that some may get lost in. Thank you again

Marcus Cassin

So I actually paused in the middle of Stephanie's big paragraph, where she was explaining how Chloe made this choice, and I thought about how it's basically like throwing someone in prison. The person being thrown in prison doesn't want it, but when you've crossed enough lines, you deserve it. And then she went and made the comparison like three sentences later. So always nice to know that I'm on a somewhat similar wavelength to one of my absolute favorite authors! And disclaimer, because this is the internet, I know some people have absolutely been thrown in prison for things they don't deserve, but I don't think anyone would make that argument here about Chloe.

Steve Raulerson

Nicely done! Happy to hear you’re not going to continue the constant barrage of negativity. This was a fun story once upon a time…

Zach

It's one thing to murder the girl so Brian doesn't have to deal with it, but it's another to do so out of rage or jealousy after Brian already hurt himself trying to not kill her. She knows it, which is why she's so pissed instead of actually being violent.

Zach

"this was the choice she made." Well, she did want to maximize the suffering she caused at that point, and this is probably more self loathing than they'd have if they killed her.

noah creed

Thank you for the chapter!

layer1

Oh bummer. They really can't fit murder into the group dynamic, but I'm team Emily when it comes to Chloe. Maybe she'll go the self sacrifice route.

Zaralith

Once again you do an incredible job of showing how human your characters are with how they think and react. Your note about not being able to show the convention prep makes sense, though i think where you started in the story was the perfect place, and throughout the story you were able to mention and call back to that prep in bits and pieces. Now that the story is established, like you said, we have a reason to see into the Ren Fair prep as a slice of life as it will also be an exploration of how these characters are going to deal with the solidifying of the 5 woman harem, with Christine coming to grips with her terrible past and attempting to understand her own actions, as well as Rebecca joining and being an anchoring force to help Steph keep Brian grounded and work through the changes from this "fun" haunt in the woods

Longoo

Thanks for the chapter! Good stuff 40. I am loving the brooding and can't wait to see how they patch this quilt of love back together!

George Olive

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Jeanie6754

Good job Boss. Have a great day. Try and relax for a bit. You did great 👍.

George Kappatos

Thank you for the chapter. Please excuse the pubble of drool on the floor. It's from the anticipation...


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