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The Power He Knows Not Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2023-01-12 17:05:33 +0000 UTC

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R. Collins

I also wanted to do it this way cause it gave me an opportunity to showcase Padma's smartness instead of just stating, 'She's Padma, she is intelligent'.

Erinnyes

Oh, I don't really think he's worse than Malfoy, or should be depicted that way. I just think he's an overly jealous boat anchor around Harry's neck best shoved quickly to the side so he can be friends with Seamus and Dean. He has much more in common with them, and they have far less for him to go into a jealous tizzy over. I'm intrigued to see this fic take a shot at redeeming him into a better friend, Lord knows there's a lot of work to do. 😁 After all, the hat sorted him instantly. He's brave, not clever or ambitious or even loyal.

tornadoboy

The task was well written. I enjoyed that, especially the fact that it gave two of them something to do rather than being purely about Harry. It made for fun reading.

tornadoboy

I gotta say I'm not a huge fan of the fanfics where Ron basically becomes worse than Malfoy. He's a dick sure, but he's not irredeemable. He's just a jealous twat. So its nice this story's not going the extreme of making him a total asshole.

Erinnyes

That was fun, I liked your additions to the task strategy and I'm very curious if that ribbon is going to show up again. Something that enables communication like that seems like a very well loaded Checkovs Gun. The convenience with Ron was well done. While usually I root for authors to just push him out of a proverbial or literal window as quickly as humanly possible, the redemption arc is off to a good start. 😁 You didn't ignore or understate his very real flaws while also showing maybe there's a person who can listen in there. Maybe. Great work all around!


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