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Her Bound Heart Ch. 4

🕑 Added 2023-01-17 16:56:30 +0000 UTC

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Erinnyes

Oh there's so many good choices for the potions... Lactation is an obvious one, the Neko idea is almost a must-do given how it rhymes with canon, but then there's other ideas like hyper flexibility, sensory modification (temporarily double both pleasure and pain), or a wit dulling potion. Just imagine the fun they could have with a combination of lactation, wit dulling, and perhaps a temporary breast expansion. She could be his perfect breeding cow for a day and would love every second of it. Truly great chapter and a fun story!

R. Collins

Thanks!

Matlef

It's great to read, looking forward to how they will realise that they are in love and how things change!

R. Collins

That's 1 thing I really wanted to write in this fic. Cause most Harry/Hermione just go, yeah, we were best friends and we're a couple now. The level of affection doesn't noticeably change. For this I really wanted to have him enraptured by her.

Matlef

There is a pretty interesting opportunity to focus a fair bit on the learning and training aspects of the dynamic as well. Unlike Together We're Harmony there is a distinct difference in experience between Harry and Hermione. But unlike His Forbidden Flower there isn't the soulbond to smooth things over? And the gap in experience isn't as huge, there will still be new things for both of them. I have to say, Harry being enamoured with Hermione is really sweet.

R. Collins

Ooh! Thank you for the suggestions! As for the scars, I didn't want to imply heavily scarred although it may have come across that way. He has a few more than average though, the reason behind which will be revealed in future chapters!

Matlef

Temporary nekomini? Yes, totally. Not really much for lactation/cowgirl (not really sure what to call it). But petplay with Hermione as a kitten sounds super fun. Perhaps a bit more focus on painplay (as long as you are comfortable with it of course). Or more explicit teasing/edging. To put this story apart from Together we're harmony? The idea of Hermione ealking around filled with Harry's seed was also rather interesting. I wonder though, Harry was described as being fairly scarred, which seems odd to me. Canon Harry was forced to do chores, as well as abused by the Dursleys. Followed by numerous scraps and injuries from the bigger named ones to just the ones he could have reasonably gotten just from their close encounters with danger that were too minor to mention. In comparison this Harry doesn't seem to have any reason to be more scarred than your average person.

tornadoboy

Potion ideas: Bodily changes, Lactation, Increased or reduced sensitivity depending on where you wanted to go with the BDSM.


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