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Her Bound Heart Ch. 9

🕑 Added 2023-02-26 02:26:21 +0000 UTC

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Ironcoil

Really enjoy this story, you’ve built a really good AU. Love the relationship and the trust you have created between them. Really looking forward to more.

Erinnyes

Lol, you could not possibly make some of the things I'm thinking of worse.

R. Collins

I was joking too tbh. I'd be the worst teacher. I just write what gives me the *vibes*. If vibes be good, it's part of the story!

Erinnyes

Ehh, the people who really need the good advice are also the ones least likely to take it, sadly.

R. Collins

Should I just do a tier for author consults lol? I like writing realistic stories, like that's one of my biggest things. Given Hermione's nature, something like this was going to happen, so why not show it?

R. Collins

Hey! Right now it's just the basics, but I will let members make suggestions once they join the server. So once you join, I'll happily take your help to add it. I'm not too used to the App.

I am lord dems

Are you going to have an AO3/FFN bot. Also love this story

tornadoboy

I'm confused. Did Lily die in this story? Admittedly I haven't paid the closest attention to this one, cute as it is. So I'm having trouble tracking. It's a bit weird that she hasn't made an appearance yet if she's alive. You'd think she and Amelia bones and a gaggle of her girlfriends, who also happen to be the most famous and senior witches in magical Britain, would swoop down and take her shopping or something. She's practically a daughter in law at this point. I imagine James won't stop gushing. Might also be a good way to get her nutty professor into trouble too if the likes of Lily Evans Potter, Amelia Bones, Alice longbottom learned she was being harassed.

Matlef

As is usual, Erinnyes makes an excellent point that i 100% agree with. Beyond that, the smut was fantastic, Harry really comes off as a pretty damn dreamy Dom i have got to say, and Hermione is just adorable. Humiliation can often be a miss for me, but when it's in the context of a caring and loving (even if they don't admit it yet) relationship it can be pretty fun. And you delivered it very well.

Erinnyes

And that is a class act demonstration of appropriate use and reception of safe words. If your sub is afraid to use them, they do not serve their purpose. Anyone who wants to write dom/sub literature and pretend they're showing a healthy relationship should have to do a paid consult with you before they're allowed to publish. (No I'm not salty about this, why?) Great work!


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