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Fleur De Lis Ch. 9

🕑 Added 2023-06-27 15:45:47 +0000 UTC

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Robert

Yeah I don’t think I can read this story anymore until there is actually progression that isn’t teasing. It’s starting to make the story less enjoyable to read. It’s a great story but this is just frustrating now. I’ll just wait for the content warnings to not say teasing. I know the person who commissioned it wanted exactly what you’re doing and it’s really well written. I just don’t like the stagnation and mutual obliviousness and refusing to move forward aspect of it. As always great writing!

tornadoboy

Nice idea about them being fireproof. The fireballs should make it work too. A way for the Veela to be unable to hurt each other. Maybe they even used Dragons in some symbiotic way in the distant past. You could really do some interesting things with Veela history and culture in this story


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