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The Grass Is Always Greener Chapter 20.

🕑 Added 2023-05-21 00:45:08 +0000 UTC

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R. Collins

Thank you! The story is a joy to write. The new chapter is coming out today and this comment is the perfect inspiration for me to sit down and finish editing it!

R. Collins

Yea, the name thing did not strike me until after I published the chapter and it's too late to change now lol.

Chad

This has to be one if not the best Harry/Daphne stories I have read. Please keep up the great work

R. Collins

Hah, I am a writer with who enjoys the guilty pleasure of writing super fluffy relationships in my stories. Which is what you'll see in all my stories. I don't enjoy writing relationship melodrama at all. All my stories are love stories where it's the ship in an adventure or fighting the big bad. Harry and Daphne won't have pointless fights or melodrama/angst that makes no sense. They love each other as has been established by now!

LT Butterfly287

Thank you, the minute you brought up the possibility of a curse I immediately got that same frustration I usually get because almost everyone just writes some angsty melodramatic crap. I'm just a guy who likes reading fanfiction and loves a relationship in fanfiction with amazing fluff and a side dish of lemons as a guilty pleasure to escape the bullshit of being a working adult.

R. Collins

I totally agree. Which is why I'm not going to use that trope for drama at all. There won't be Daphne 'breaking up' with Harry or chapters about how she's 'dying' or something else that's just there for pointless drama and angst. I plan to use it for fluff and to bring them closer to each other. Can guarantee it won't affect their relationship, won't cause excessive angst and they're going to get a happy ending with a family of their own. You'll like my take on the curse, I can pretty much say that with certainty! Oh, and if you like this story check out Fantastic Boyfriends and How To Find Them, you'll love that too!

LT Butterfly287

I love the story but one thing I've always hated in the community is the Greengrass blood curse. It's stupid and became popular because of some angst writer wanted to write excessive drama a little over a decade ago and some how the trop has stayed strong to this day. It's personally not something I'll ever like cause drama can be good in small doses but most writers when using the blood curse only do drama.

Erinnyes

Absolutely love the chapter. The feelings were real and the drama hit home without dragging on needlessly, and using Sirius as the voice of reason was just fun. Daphne's parents were also great. You did a wonderful job on their personalities. My only complaint is actually about Mrs. Greengrass' first name, every time I read it I think she's Amelia Bones. I would happily read a chapter dedicated to she and Harry getting to know each other, and honestly I think it could be really positive for character development. The scene with Vernon was lovely. It's what canon should have done by book four.

R. Collins

They don't know yet tbh. They'll have their happy ending together, this will just make Harry more protective of her.

R. Collins

I really need more people to appreciate Slytherins as more than generic baddies. Lol

LordWhiteWalker

Wait so Daphne has the blood curse?

R. Collins

Ooh, I have a plan, don't worry, Harry and Daphne will get to have kids of their own without the curse hanging over their heads. The hurt will lead to comfort, and finally to fluff and a happy ending!

Robert

I hope there is a way for Harry to nullify the curse by the end of the story. Harry’s desire for family is such a major trait of his that I don’t want to see adoption as the route. They should be able to have their happy ever after with a child of their own. That’s what would make the hurt aspect of this worth it.

tornadoboy

Yaay Greengrass parents. And sounds like they're taking a more active role in the story too! Your stuff with them is some of your best writing. I absolutely adore Amelia and Cyrus. And Cyrus is such a wonderful Slytherin in this chapter. In the best ways!


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