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A Flame Awakened Chapter 5.

🕑 Added 2023-10-11 17:40:04 +0000 UTC

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R. Collins

It doesn't look like she's winning, but there are still 2 polls to go. If you don't want her to be with Harry, remember to vote against her (and for the characters you do want in the Coven!)

King17

No Ginny please !

red demon

Loved the chapter. I liked Harry's style. Daphne helpless and under pressure. If she failed it would be Padma who paid for it. I think Harry's right in that is the only way Daphne would take a punishment serious. Daphne would welcome and take a spanking or put in denial but she wouldn't want Padma to suffer. I would love to see a future scene where Daphne fails a test from Harry and as punishment Daphne has to spank Padme with her own hairbrush.

Alreadyhome

I like your take on Daphne's desires that she was unknowingly trained away from. You might want to be a bit more careful about remembering things like where you've got her hands cuffed. There just a few times where it seemed like her hands were cuffed in front of her instead of behind her as you described them as being cuffed at. A little mind drift in writing that kind of a situation is understandable though. At least it is to me.


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