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The Grass Is Always Greener Chapter 24.

🕑 Added 2023-08-07 19:00:14 +0000 UTC

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Beckendwarf

Fair enough. Gabrielle is always a fun choice. Could be an interesting dynamic with daphne, depending on how Gabrielle is portrayed? What we’ve seen of her so far seems a bit more… idk, in control or knows herself a bit more? Idk? But yeah, super hyped to see where this story is going

R. Collins

Hey! I did muse about it a couple of times but I haven't decided yet. Until Year 5 this is going to be a purely Haphne story and if I think it'll be interesting to add a Lady Black I'll do a poll here to decide if I should do it and who it should be!

Beckendwarf

So wait, I’m a tad bit confused. I know there was talk in a note about a future lady black as well as Potter? Is that still a plot point? Or is this purely Haphne story?

Rogue

Noooo! Why would you leave us on such a cliffhanger? You’re horrible for that! Absolutely loving the story, and it’s really enjoyable to see how you are developing Cyrus as a character.

R. Collins

I fully agree. I think from the beginning of this story Daphne has been highly self-reliant and has grown up having to take care of her sister and that's been her mindset in her first real relationship too. She has only slowly learnt to let Harry in and while Harry won't be very angry he's going to be genuinely upset that she hid it from him no matter her intentions and it will be an important learning moment. It's funny because they both put each other's needs first, even before their relationship. As will be pointed out, Harry would have done the same for her if the tables were reversed. As for the hair, I'll go back to my story notes and check! I think I wrote her as having longer hair, but I could be wrong! I might have referred to the notes for the wrong Daphne for this chapter.

Cqys

Maybe I'm off my rocker here but I'm fairly sure Daphne has been written here as having just around shoulder length hair this entire time and now she's got lower back length hair? It just jumped out at me as not matching the rest of the story. Might be mixing my stuff up. While I understand what Daphne is doing here I expect Harry to rightfully be crazy pissed off when he finds out she hid something this important from him. You just don't do that in relationships. It's a big no no. Probably going to be quite a learning experience when it all goes down. It's not something Harry can just brush off because of the good intentions.

R. Collins

I can guarantee all my stories have a happy ending and all three of them will have one in this one too. What I can't promise is the things that will happen on the journey to said happy ending :P

Lord Terra

If something happens to Harry, Daphne and their unborn baby and it’s not a happy ending… There will be rioting.


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