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A Flame Awakened Chapters 3 and 4

🕑 Added 2023-09-15 17:40:17 +0000 UTC

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KingOfSalt

Luna

Robert

It would have been fun for you to maybe not include Susan in that poll, put her in a separate one with other girls who are commonly in your pairings to make decisions harder. Would have been interesting to see a new girl with different characteristics (Megan is completely unexplored so you could have gone anywhere with it) Really enjoyed chapter 2 and like the idea behind this story. Harry as a high potential wizard but just unfulfilled potential at the story’s start is a great angle to take. Growth Arcs are fun I can definitely see potential influences helping him become who he needs to be. Cheers!

Rogue

Damnit. You got my hopes up for a new chapter already.


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