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🕑 Added 2018-05-03 03:12:46 +0000 UTC

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madp

I may be a little slow, but I will help any time! I can also try to translate English "odaibako" back to Japanese or simplify meaning, if it helps you.

石川ヒロヂ

I want to ask for editing by all means when you can afford it in the future! I think the nuance is easier to convey than my translation. A lot of despises words... English is profound...(lol)

madp

I am pleased that you are satisfied with my translation and editing! I will continue to help as long as you desire. "地味子" was actually easy! English has many words for insulting the appearance......(lol)

石川ヒロヂ

Amazing! Thanks,madp. The onomatopoeia was also translated, making it easier to convey to English-speaking people. The meaning of "地味子" is translated in English, and it is good job!

tomlee

thank you so much for translating! youre amazing!

madp

PART 2: "Listen to your master! We'll buy it at the dollar store [generic word for discount store] on the way to the bath house..." "You'd better start moving or else I'll just drag you the whole way there by your outie." "Ugh [sound of disgust, shame, embarrassment]....c'mon.....[shortened form of "come on", which also has meaning of begging someone to do what you are asking them to do] I don't want to be seen in public....like this....."

madp

This is my attempt. I tried to make it sound like natural (casual) English. Please let me know if I made any obvious errors. I will do what you did and add translation notes to help you understand. "Hey, if I hooked up [slang: become boyfriend/girlfriend] with that frumpy [no fashion sense, wears clothes that fit badly] girl over there do you think there's a chance she has a freaky [strange erotic interest] side?" "Hell no! You're not that desperate...[added an extra line that helps English context]" (Ring welded through her navel flesh) (Boyfriend's name engraved) NOTE: I must split translation into two posts because Fanbox character limit is 1000.