Early Bird: Library of Laughter Ch. 2
🕑 Added 2018-10-05 14:03:12 +0000 UTCIn which Rufus gets tangled in some ribbons, and he and Brielle begin to suspect that something is off about this town.
This commission is simultaneously really fun to write (I get to just focus on the hypnosis and tickling) and really difficult (not being myself an archaeologist). I've already gotten multiple angry comments on Literotica about discrepancies, and one person is quite frustrated with me for stereotyping the Irish! To be clear, this is a purely fantastical valley.
Comments
Lorelei
Aw, thanks so much! I think that's the first praise for accuracy I've gotten on this particular story. ;D
Wheels
This is quite possibly my favourite among any fetish stories I've ever read, I love the setting and, to your credit all the names are proper Irish language names.
Wild Bill
Tickling isn't really my thing, a little is fun but not to this extent really. Brielle at the massage parlour though... *God* that's hot, hypnotic massage and brainwashing is just the most amazing thing *ever*. <3
Lorelei
A commission this size costs around $300, with price variations depending mainly on how strict the schedule is, the content, and whether the commissioner is a patron.
T
The combination of hypnosis and tickling is quite entertaining to read. Will there be a Library of Laughter Ch. 3? And since you mention this is a commission, how much do you charge for such commissions?
I cannot wait for the next chapter
Lorelei
Thank you! I always love it when I manage to get people to go along with one of my weird kinks. ;D
Latavia
Tickling isn't really my thing but it may well be by the end of this series. Something about it clicks with me, I really like the pacing of it.
Timothy Ellis
FWIW, nobody's ever stereotyped the Irish more than we've stereotyped ourselves lol