gigglinggoblin
patreon
Early Bird: Minding Her Manor, Ch. 02
🕑 Added 2023-04-15 23:34:30 +0000 UTCIn which Lapis dons a headset-visor with delectable consequences, and the girls decide to split up and search the supposedly haunted Manor.
Wow, has it really been five months? My goodness. I really enjoyed writing and editing this second chapter, and I hope you do too! I've never written a proper "flashing images VR headset"-style hypnosis scene, and I tried my best to do it justice, even though text isn't really the best format for it. XD
I really enjoyed getting to dig into Minni's and Olivine's characters just a little here and sort of show some nuance. I think it integrated really well into the horny stuff, if I'm allowed to toot my own horn a little.
Anyways, I'm back to writing! I'm not sure what's up for next week, and it may not be an update week owing to Tax Day and some minor medication issues, but I'll do my very best! I'll at least get the Bonus Pairing poll up, and I think the Kelpie/Gretel BP will be my next big priority.
Next Time: The girls have split up to find the source of these strange happenings. But what will intoxicating temptations Button find in the wine cellar? What verdant delights will Minni encounter in the greenhouse? And what soothing nothings will be whispered to Olivine in the nursery?
Comments
Zanni
For never having written a “proper VR” set you did spectacularly.”!
Yshomatsu
It’s only chapter two and I’m already wishing this story was a full book <3
