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Early Bird: Minding Her Manor, Ch. 01
🕑 Added 2022-11-26 20:29:41 +0000 UTCIn which five best friends meet up at a supposedly haunted manor and get caught up flirting and playing with each other a little. After all, they're all alone here, right? Right?
Hello, my lovelies! So, um, that one Bonus Pairing, so long overdue? Here's why. It's another series, and the first chapter is actually a little light on the action. Oops. I'm really excited for this, though. It's got some characters I really enjoy writing, and there's so many options for the series. Hopefully it won't go too long!
What's more, this story marks a return to form in the sense that it's an open-ended "from a hat" series--these five girls could run into anything, really. It's a haunted house! Major "areas" I have in mind for the manor are the greenhouse, the kitchens, the wine cellar, the nursery, the doll room, the dressing room, the bathchamber, the cramped attic, the library, and, of course, the cozy sitting room. Suggestions are welcome!
As a warning, this series may get a little dark, but I promise the potential Bad Ends don't mean these girls are assured a bad ending!
A big regret I have is not using this chapter more to foreshadow those areas I just mentioned. That's a staple of the haunted house genre, and I totally goofed it. There's even multiple scenes where characters explore the place, and I only foreshadowed one room! If I ever rewrite this series, you better believe I'll fix that.
NaNoWriMo has kept me impossibly busy this month--busy enough that the November BP Poll may not make it out until the very last minute. That being said, I'm doing really well with work in general!
Next Time: The girls play a fun little game of talking to ghosts, but what happens when the ghosts start talking back? Is Lapis safe wearing that visor?
Comments
Lorelei
Ooh, I love that!
Zanni
Hmm if you’re still looking for suggestions I cannot help shaking the idea of a firefly/lightning bug sort of lure. Like a creature, insectoid or not, that lures in travelers with an attractive flashing rump for a little fun.
Titan7
Oh, this is a very hot and sexy start to a series. Love haunted Sexy Filled Mansions. I am looking forward to reading what happens next. As for suggestions for the girls to encounters 1) Lamia or Coil Fiends 2) Sexy Big Butt Succubus Maids - using their Butts and various tools 3) Sexy Mimics that drag the girls into their lair to be F**** 4) Haunted Furniture that bounds the girls face down and they F*** 5) Sexy Lady Ghosts I could go on and on but I stop here. Looking forward to reading your future content.
Lorelei
Ooh, fun-fun! I actually had something like that already in mind!
Lorelei
In general for this series!
Chris
When you say that suggestions are open, do you mean, in general or for this specific setting? Things a haunted manor might have…
Lorelei
Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was so much fun to write.
hellenberg
Wow. Now this! This is incredibly hot. Love Olivine's private encounter with Laleli. Love the cute interactions. Absolutely love where this thing is going. If I could add multiple likes, I would.
Sothe Dain
Oh I'm so happy to see my little idea bear such fruit! I can't wait to dig into this further! Absolutely worth the wait. If you're looking for ideas you can't go wrong with spooky dolls, maybe a voodoo doll house? Evil puppets? Lonely mannequins that want to play dress up? There's plenty of possibilities.
