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(WIP) Change of Rules 2 Page 13
🕑 Added 2018-08-17 15:05:30 +0000 UTCHere is the next WIP!
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DM TEAM
Oh no worries, it's not my first language either XD. Thanks for the feedback. I'll make sure the text is better once I upload the finished version.
H2ODestroyer
Hmm, reading this again, one sentence keeps bugging me. "I don't know what I am thinking,..." ... shouldn't it be more like "I don't know what I was thinking,..."? Sorry if I'm on the wrong here, english is not my first language ^^
H2ODestroyer
Hehe, looks like a typical day after bad-dragon had a sale ^^
