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(WIP) Sis's Gamble 2 - Page 49
🕑 Added 2022-08-22 00:58:16 +0000 UTCFeaturing:
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DM TEAM
Thanks to both of you
DM TEAM
Thanks!
Side B
Ah yes, I posted a correction suggestion, but that one seems to make more sense. I think I misunderstood the intended meaning.
Side B
"I'm not a very confident" -> "I'm not very confident" (The 'a' should be removed) "Where they can feel they contestants, instead of see them" -> ", where they can feel their contestants, instead of seeing them" (A continuation of the previous sentence, their instead of they, seeing instead of see.)
Dm_is_best
Just thought I’d point out before you make the final version, It says “feel they contestants” instead of “feel the contestants”
Jamie Hawkins
I'm excited 😊
