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Wonder Woman reboot
🕑 Added 2024-01-13 12:44:14 +0000 UTCAs mentioned in my 2024 announcement plan, I have now gone through the first four chapters of WW Domesticated and cleared them up for better structuring and readability.
Note that these 4 chapters have been combined into 2, with new titles to better reflect the plot. I have also added several pages of new content, as well as a fully illustrated Ch1.
These new versions will replace the old ones, which have been removed. Note that Ch5 - Castigation is no longer included as I decided to move that scene further ahead in the story. So don't worry, it will come back later!
More changes will come gradually as I keep improving the text. Therefore I have put a version number on each PDF so you'll know which version you have. No major changes will likely be made from this point on, so a re-read is not required, unless you feel like revisiting this story with some added spice. I plan to make this story a huge epic spanning years, so I want the foundation to be solid before moving on. Currently, I am working on the next chapter, which will finally detail Frank's kingly- and Diana's degrading breakfast.
I hope you enjoy these changes, and if you spot something else that can be improved, don't hesitate to contact me.
