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Did You Forget Who You Belong To? - A4F/TF/NB
🕑 Added 2022-07-18 19:32:56 +0000 UTCAnother script!!! It's been a while since I released a script, and this one specifically is something I've been meaning to do for quite some time. It's a rewrite of "Rosy Lips and Thorny Words."
I've been told several times over the last year and some months since I released that audio that the title makes women of color (especially black women) feel excluded. I'd like to think this is a part of me growing as a person, and also doing what I can to make my work as inclusive and accessible as possible. To that end, I've also removed gendered terms as the original version calls the listener "good girl" etc.
Let me know what you think! (Also, lemme know if I should edit in a version for a femme/NB dom with a strap? I was thinking about that...) π
Comments
sarahgrin
This girl is proud of YOU! π»π»π»
Buttercup
I am: freaking out π΅βπ«
This_Guy_Eli
I'm so glad you like it! It was a very spicy one, and one of the first audios I ever wrote myself. π₯°π
This_Guy_Eli
π Well I'll be bringing it back to life in audio form next week...
sarahgrin
I love this so much, I came back to read it again. And I see what you addedβ¦ ππΌπ» so hot! I want to listen to it right now but Iβm in public and have been all day.β¦ so thanks for the script β¦ giving me another way in, with memory and imaginationβ¦ Sending some sweetness your way β¦ π₯°π³
Buttercup
Oh. My. God. I remember this particular audio vividly. Itβs what turned Buttercup into Sluttercup. Glad to chance upon it again in script form π€©
Lil Bun
Eli, I'm about to listen to this at work when I know I shouldn't. My RBF can only hide so much π
This_Guy_Eli
Thank you Elvian! I'm so glad you like it! It's definitely a spicy one, and I'm happy to be bringing it back to life! π₯°π
Elvy
*incoherent stuttering* for research purposes, there are so many thoughts swirling in my head. But oh FUCK that was hot. And that tone you used, had me feeling like I was the one in trouble. This is going in the archives for sure
This_Guy_Eli
It's been nearly 2 years since this came out originally... which is insane... I'm very excited to see others give it a go, and breathe a new life into one of the older audios on my profile! π₯°π
This_Guy_Eli
Thank you Sarah! I'm glad you like it! I'll definitely see about doing a strap version... π€
This_Guy_Eli
π I'm glad you like it!
This_Guy_Eli
https://www.reddit.com/r/gonewildaudio/comments/iqicw9/m4f_rosy_lips_and_thorny_words_sir_firm_but/ This is the original version. It's an oldie, but one of my more popular audios!
Lil Bun
Could anyone possibly link the OG? For scientific purposes of course π
jacijoan
Eliiiii!!!!!! I loved the original so much, but thisss holy shit. Just the simple changes youve made have made it even better!!!!! I can't wait to hear this version and to hopefully get to hear some other creators record it also! It seems like so long ago but also just like yesterday that I heard "red lips and thorny words" and I'm so glad you're using all the progress you've made since then to make your work even better. Terrific work Eli as always! You're the bestπ€
sarahgrin
I listened to βRosy Lipsβ last week for the first time β¦ this is just delectable. Iβm a cis woman so phrases like βgood girlβ are beautiful for me (and Iβm exceptionally tall, so I like diminutive terms), but I agree, this is part of your growth, and I admire you for making adjustments. π» Iβm always on the side of being more inclusive! Keep up the amazing work, dear Eli! ππ³ ps femme nb strap on is a brilliant idea
kiaraβ¨
sheeesh π₯΅ was both a mistake and a treat opening this at work, my little secret π
