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He Smiles - M4A

🕑 Added 2023-07-22 01:46:40 +0000 UTC

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This_Guy_Eli

Honestly, I have so much fun writing, especially trying to delve into these sorts of stylistic short stories. I had the idea to start each paragraph with the same phrase, and just started writing from there and it came out to be something I'm pretty proud of 🥰

Stephanie

Only you could write such a beautifully captivating and eloquent story about… edging. You’re cruel for that. But you’re so DESCRIPTIVE! Ugh. It’s so good. And I love how not only are you descriptive about the sexy stuff (because of course you are, you have to be), but even down to the rainstorm and the moonlight. I love when I can picture that really well, because I usually can’t *see* some of those elements in real life due to my vision. But when an author can lay it out for me so I can take it in, that’s always nice. 🥰 I did love the style of “he smiles” beginning each paragraph just before the loop. Just before the reader is at the edge. Chef’s kiss. Bravo

Ashley

Oh, OK, fine. You’re not wrong. One of the best things about living in the Midwest. 😊

This_Guy_Eli

hehehe I can't help it! Rainstorms are the best! Thank you so much for listening! 🥰💕

This_Guy_Eli

Thank youuu! I've been an avid fan of writing all my life, and it's really cool that I can channel that into something fun for you all. It means a lot that you enjoyed it 🥰💕

Ashley

Sir, what tf kind of full-moon, time-loop sex magick is this?! Well played. Also, please stop indulging my love of rainstorms in these stories. I mean, yes, I obviously like when you do it, but also cut it out already, you chaos demon. You’re killin’ me, Smalls. 😏

acutefish

This is so lovely. It’s so rad how even in a different kind of writing (compared to a script) it still feels so you! What a treat to get to see another side if you creatively. :) thank you for sharing. 💖


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