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I'll Be Your Victim, You Be My Mate - M4A

🕑 Added 2023-10-28 01:29:17 +0000 UTC

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This_Guy_Eli

Honestly writing is a LOT easier than making the audios, because I don't have to find time to perform, I don't have to deal with audio intrusions from cars and random bullshit, I don't have to sit for a couple hours and record/find SFX and then also spend hours putting it all together. I can just sit back (hell even in bed and just write on my phone) and blurb what silly little story comes to mind 😁💕

Stephanie

Now you listen here… you didn’t say anything about writing STORIES, Eli. I knew you could write, but this is SO good! I know I’m jumping in the middle here and don’t have much context, but the writing here is really quite good. I don’t really need it. I really love how you pay attention to every last detail, down to the feeling of something. As someone who’s visually impaired, I love when authors explain every single detail to me- because irl I often miss it. But here I don’t have to :) If you ever did write stories and did the audio for them, I’d for sure be on board. But only when you don’t have a bunch of things on your plate already because omg dude you’re so overloaded all the time

oh my sweet hunky himbo werewolf, the perfect halloween treat. this was so much fun to read! there’s such a sensuality to your work that i really appreciate. i love all the little sense details with the breath, the body heat, the throbbing, the heartbeat, all of it. i’m also continually wowed by how well you handle 4A content; it’s a real skill to be able to make things super accessible while still feeling so personal and intimate and not at all vague. really enjoying your writing and look forward to reading more!! also the convenient comically large armchair made me lol haha

Patricia Evelyn

Eliiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!! Your writing is amazing and I LOVE body type difference(also LOVE werewolf)I don't know what to say, but it's a great Halloween gift

Moira

This was so FUN!! I didn’t read the tags first just for giggles so I didn’t expect the himbo to be uhhhh way better than just a himbo. The twist felt subversive in such a cool way, I was like “ohhhh main character is a succubus or something for sure, wait- why are we talking about his TEETH WAIT THERE’S TWO MONSTERS AHHHHHHH”

This_Guy_Eli

Jaciiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank youuuuuuuuu!!!! Hehe it HAS been a while since I've included some spanking, and it was really fun to write it out instead of voicing it because I could give it so much more FLAVOR with the description. I will not tell you whether I'm a werewolf or not. I'm so glad you like my writing, and I definitely plan to write more (not necessarily a sequel), so keep your eyes out for that 🥰💕

This_Guy_Eli

Thank you so much Carrie!!! Inescapably entertaining... how much kinder can you get??? AHHH! This one was stupidly fun to write, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the delicious details 🥰💕

This_Guy_Eli

Yay! I love leaving people speechless 😁💕

This_Guy_Eli

😁💕💕

This_Guy_Eli

Happy Halloween indeed hehe! I'm glad I could provide something not too spooky for you, Sarah 🥰💕

This_Guy_Eli

Hehe thank youuuuu! It was a very fun one to write once I got the dynamic down between the two. You don't see too many werewolf x demon (succubus/incubus) sort of stories (or at least I don't) so it seemed like a really fun style to explore. Also to repeat my answer from your previous comment: AAAAHH! There's no way I could write well enough for a whole book lol 😅💕

jacijoan

ELLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!! Elllliiiiiiiiiii!!! Uh hey eli! This is like very kewl and im totally still sane after reading this!!! I have once again packed my things and settled in because yeah i live here now!!! There so much about this that I absolutely love! I really enjoyed the spanking 😂🤣 its been a little while since you’ve included that into your content! Also you described shifting way too well👀 you can totally tell me if youre a werewolf i wont tell anyone i pinky promise! Anyways im so very very extremely happy that youve been writting more!!! You really are such a talented author! your gift for storytelling is unmatched!!! Terrific job Eli!!! I totally wouldn’t complain if you wrote some kind of sequel to this hehehe🖤

tropey

Wait I forgot one: "peepers and pry-ers"

Carrie

Woah, so not used to you describing things like “massive thighs” opposed to me just imagining that with this switch in mediums, MANY examples of that during had me smh like gdi 😑 hehe, but also hey woo massive thighs 😛 !!! I fell so hard for the reader-inserts perspective throughout, remaining broad but still uniquely characterized. Love a classic Eli reveal in there being something more to Penton. His endearing himbofacation and awkwardness was cute along side the readers denial of possible feelings bc of their initial plan. Love love love this one, so fun vv hot, you kill your Halloween themed content and your writing pieces have become my faves bc of how inescapably entertaining they are to read. 😌 Thank youu, so well done, what a warm, cozy treat. X.

Brooklynn Barr

i think i'm supposed to comment but i'm kinda just in awe at the moment. it's brilliant, Eli,

tropey

I decided that instead of having cohesive thoughts, I'd just write down moments that delighted me: "He's so fragile. Muscles rippling against his flannel button-up, one wouldn't expect him to quiver at the sight of a decrepit mansion." "Delicious, helpless moans." "Oh fuck... you." "burying the ache like treasure to savor later. " "the absolute weapon" "I'll be your "victim..." as long as you're willing to be my mate... What do you say...?" -- I don't care if it's the fucking title, the whole reveal was so good, honestly. "your horns once beautiful symbols of your hellish heritage, now mere handlebars to guide you onto his shaft." "You can feel a smile in his breath on your back." '"Much better... warm and cozy. Does that feel nostalgic, demon?" He laughs at his own joke before awkwardly clearing his throat and wrapping his arms about your body.' --also bitesbitesbitesbites-- --- I'm still utterly offended that I love second person the way you write it. Your stupid brain is too good at this shit. I'm going to riot.

deja

😳 oh 👏🏾❤️

sarahgrin

Ummm… 👉👈 … this was soooo nice, so yummy, so immersive! thank you for the just-spooky-enough content … I love this time of year and being a bit naughty 😈 but I can’t handle anything actually scary. This is just perfect, great pacing, great word painting, great world building, and ya know, great…everything else. Keep up the amazing work, take care of yourself, and happy Halloween 🥺🎃

Artemis

First off how dare you….second that was incredible and repeat my previous comment of asking when you’re gonna write us a full romance novel…third I fucking love this couple….your writing is so good I really love this format that you’ve started exploring!


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