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Stay Flexibile (Lay the Very Best - Chapter 109)

🕑 Added 2023-06-04 23:28:51 +0000 UTC

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Premier

Oh yeah for sure I could adapt but that’s miles off for me.

Abborre

If you want to you can publish it. Pokemon names and references would need to be edited, but editing the story is good practice to.

Kenneth Welever

That last sentence makes you an even more valuable author to read from. I love this work particularly and don't think you need to get rid of the framework to make it entirely your own, just the terminology to complete the separation. The adaptation is definitely fun too.

Premier

Aw thanks! The Pokémon does give me a bit of a framework to work in, but it could have been AU for sure. I find the adaption kind of fun though so I’ve stuck it out. Having it be readable to people with no knowledge is also important to me! So I avoid anything too inside baseball. This is my first real attempt at fiction so definetly be some improvements for next time round, but till then I don’t want to cut the story short. I know how much it sucks to have a fic you love suddenly die out and I won’t become one of those!

Kenneth Welever

If I were entirely honest, I'd say linking this story directly to pokemon is hurting you more than it helps. Your world is unique enough to be entirely it's own thing held mostly to pokemon through terminology and loose concepts that the reader can infer into it as a separate thing. I'm a little outdated with pokemon so I don't even recognize 1/2 -3/4 of the pokemon you use. (TBH I really just want to see smut of this quality published. Could you imagine the audiobook this would make with the right sultry voice acting? It'd be a real toe curler.) I can honestly say that I have read published works with far less care to character development and less well developed word flow than what you present to us on a weekly basis.

Premier

Haha sorry! The perils of small chapters. The gang will all get there eventually

Kenneth Welever

As one who reads for both the story and the sex, these cliffhangers are blueballing


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