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A Moan of Ice And Fire (Lay the Very Best - Chapter 203)

🕑 Added 2024-01-27 01:20:47 +0000 UTC

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Cpt.Jack

Much better from my point of view. Thanks for being such an acommodating sport with all my nitpicking.

Premier

I've changed it! It is meant to be her being petulant but it doesn't quite come out right on reflection.

Cpt.Jack

Really nailed it there with having bratty Brandy bringing Marina out of her shell. Very hot and interesting scence, also nice combinations. I love how you manage to make every sex scence unique and interesting, that's a very hard thing to do. "Marina, uppies." (not sure if that's a phrase in use outside of children playing with adults, but for me it's definitly a phrase connected with children. so it was quite jarring and brought me out of immersion, also got me quite a bit out of the mood. Maybe that's just a me thing but I would not use that phrase in any sexy context. But I would love to hear what your opinion on this is.) Maple's body is the central conduit (is -> was)

Jessy

Need to keep her mouth occupied if you dont want her to come out.

Premier

I don’t know if we should be encouraging this

Jessy

See! Bratty brandy brings out the best in people


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