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Cuddle Bug (Lay the Very Best - Chapter 212)

🕑 Added 2024-02-17 02:10:27 +0000 UTC

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Abborre

At this rate Sparky will learn Chilly Reception

Premier

I can't believe I forgot Sparky had four eyes briefly

Cpt.Jack

Poor Sparky I'm looking forward to the scene that gives her the confidence to evolve. Brandy snorted as Wren spinned her red squiggly eyes.(spun) Brandy just petted Brandy's fur, letting her nestle in as she made soothing noises. (second Brandy -> Sparky) Brandy kissed both her eyes, making her blink (both doesn't really work with four eyes) Brandy let her hand trail down Sparky's arms and stroke into the puff of fur on her chest. (Should this be 'up' instead of 'down'?) not so much she got squeezed as she enjoyed it so much. (I think the last part is a bit ambivalently worded) "It'd be weird if a Mimikyu couldn't, well. Mimic you."(I think the full stop is wrong in this place. Either before 'well' or not at all and a comma in its place) Brandy doubted that Saffira had a ton of spirit, but forward planning didn't really seem to be her strength. (didn't doubt)

Sup3r J4k3

A joke isn't good if you can't groan and laugh at the same time.


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