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A Sizable Development (Lay the Very Best - Chapter 218)

🕑 Added 2024-03-03 21:43:10 +0000 UTC

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Cpt.Jack

Somehow my edits got lost. It took effort not just to order Calcine to fuck Wren's brains out. (effort to not just order) "You can feel Dinah against your skin, can't you. Isn't she excited for more?" "Yes," Wren moaned, "She wants it." (I think you switched Dinah and Wren up here. Dinah -> Wren / Wren –> Dinah) thrown chairs just fine now she nearly had her senses back, (now 'that' she) She tried to fly up, but the more tiles were bursting out ('but more' without the 'the') Woah, Dinah, wait, I haven't even put it in her yet.!" (one puctuation too many) There was already a glistening there. (Don't think you can use glistening as a noun) Brandy was confident she could take Wren apart using a weapon worth of Mercury. (worthy)

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It's a fun one!

Cpt.Jack

Never thought I could indulge in my 'living armor' fetish in a Pokémon story, but thanks for that. <3 Yes," Wren moaned, "She wants it." (should be Dinah talking) She tried to fly up, but the more tiles were bursting out (but more) Woah, Dinah, wait, I haven't even put it in her yet.!" (one punctuation to many) There was already a glistening there. (Don't think you can use glistening as a noun)

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It’s super handy!

Jessy

This was one of the many ideas I had with the living cloths idea, a shapable blob has so many uses!


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